送你雅思大作文的9个锦囊（下）
?疫情期间自己在家准备雅思，等待复考的孩子们，大家辛苦了！
吟领Tips：自己备考，很容易狂练输入项（阅读、听力），而搁置输出项（写作、口语），可能是因为口写相对主观、提分有难度，导致畏难情绪或不知如何有效备考。吟领在这里提醒大家，时间既然花了，就一定要注意合理分配听说读写复习时间，毕竟最终雅思通过是四科都要达标的。
今天你写作复习了吗？来看看吟领雅思-曾老师给大家递上的——雅思写作锦囊妙计。
曾老师解答
11年雅思写作教学经验
曾出版雅思教材
《雅思写作攻略》
《雅思写作高级语法教程》
《雅思基础词汇4500巧记速记》
雅思写作7.5分大神
学生写作达标率90%以上
众多学生达到6.5-7写作高分
持高校教师资格证
曾任4年大学英语教师
锦囊六
避免词汇重复&句型重复，要求掌握同义词100（吟领雅思-曾老师将要求学生记忆写作常用同义词100个）；同时要掌握4种句型——
1. 避免词汇的重复，例如：I think, 可替换为I believe, I insist；good 可替换为 great, fantastic; important 可替换为 significant, essential 等等。
2.避免句型重复
请大家一起来研读一下这几个出自一篇4分考生习作的句子：Internet is a very great invention. We can get a lot of information on it. We can have fun from it. We play online games on it…
读完之后你有什么感觉，是否觉得颇有点儿类似I like you, you like me, we like everybody 这样的干巴句式呢？
其实，我们都学习过4种句型，它们是：①简单句，②带复杂成分的简单句，③并列句，④复杂句
①The Internet is a very great invention.
②A world without Internet can not be imagined.
③We can get a lot of information on it, and we can also have fun from it.
④Even if some people believe that there are some disadvantages broughtby Internet, they cannot deny it brings more advantages.
掌握了这4中句型，以后在写作时，就可以用不同的句型交替着出现，这样文章的各个句子间就具备了跳跃的美感，避免了总是单句的无聊，或总是长难句的痛苦。例如：
1. Of course not everyone enjoys their work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases, an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality.
2. Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality. As a result of it, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising.
锦囊七
一定要有逻辑联系和衔接（掌握好【连词”的使用，详细内容在吟领雅思课堂 【11个句子关系”）
1. 段落之间要用逻辑联系和衔接，这需要用【连词”来实现。
2. 句子和句子之间的逻辑转换和衔接也需要用有效的【连词”来实现。
例如下面这两个段之间，句子和句子之间的过渡和衔接：
On the one hand, there is no doubt that work at home may bring a couple of benefits to employees. In the first place, working at home makes employees have freedom in choosing the working way and schedule which best suits them. Thus, they can effectively enhance their efficiency in work. In the second place, working at home is beneficial to employees’ physical and mental health. Obviously, they carry out their work at any comfortable states rather than the limited time and places supervised by their bosses. Last but not least, working at home enables employees to economize on clothing and transportation costs, and it contributes to less time-consuming as well. Employees may fulfill their potential in terms of work ing without going out of the door.
On the other hand, honestly, if not properly managed, having workers working at home may render some employees unmotivated and inefficient, which exerts detrimental influence on the economic benefits of employers.
锦囊八
避免数据不实：
In China, there are more than 300 thousand graduates, and 90% of them can not be employed。
我们有时在写作中会杜撰一些数据，虽然考官不会对这些数据的真实性评分，但你起码不能让这个数据一眼看去就知道是假的。如果是58%，63% 这样的数据，可能让人觉得稍微靠谱些。不过，最好是不要在文中出现任何数据，前任考官明确表达过他们对这些数据的厌恶。
锦囊九
小心！价值观错误！
虽然如果价值观错了也不会被扣分，但是多少还是会影响考官的心情的，并且如果选择了错误的那一方进行阐述，会出现无话可说的窘境和逻辑混乱。以下诸如此类的观点纯粹就是甘冒天下之大不违，请避免：
1. 网络的好处是给我们提供了免费盗版电影。
2. 保护动物是浪费资源。
3. 动物是我们的朋友，决不能拿动物做实验。（如果不拿动物，比如老鼠，做试验，难道拿树、拿我们自己做试验吗？）
4. 农民进城，我们城市素质就降低了，他们还抢我们的就业机会。
5. 穷人穷是因为懒惰。（家境，残疾，厄运同样会造成贫困！）
6. 老年人在家养老比在养老院好，因为他们可以在家里照顾孙子。
7. 科技的应用造成了失业 （这个你没法阐述了！因为放眼望去，如今的世界已经是一个科技时代，虽然在短时间内造成了失业，比如智能机械的使用，但世界的财富却被更多地创造出来了，人们比过去更富足了而不是因为失业而更悲惨了）
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